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Thursday, 25 September 2014
Wednesday, 24 September 2014
Peace Sense Poem
I am learning to write a Poem about Peace One Day using my senses.
I am so proud of being able to use good adjectives to describe what I am writing about in my poem.
It can be tricky to describe the senses.
The thesaurus can help me by giving me interesting words to use.
The next step for me in my learning is to write a more interesting poem.
Tuesday, 23 September 2014
ANZAC Recount
Here We Go!
It was 2am on the 25th of April 1915. It was pitch black. All you could see was the moon. I was shaking uncontrollably because I was so terrified.
Suddenly a bullet flew past my ear. I heard the bullet land in the water. I quickly tried to get my gun ready. I was so scared that I almost peed my pants. My whole body was shaking like I was burning. I tried to shot my gun but my gun was jammed. I quickly stole the gun from the dead soldier in front of me.
By Ben
I am learning to write an interesting recount.
I am so proud of making my recount interesting by using similes and adjectives.
It can be tricky to the right adjectives for the right sentence.
The thesaurus can help me by giving me better words.
The next step for me in my learning is to write an even better recount.
Ukuelele
We have been learning to play the Ukulele with Mrs Talijaard.
Peace One Day
As part of our Inquiry work on Peaceful Communities we have been learning about World Peace Day on September 21st. On Friday 19th September we held a Taster Shared Lunch with Rooms 19 and 22. We had to bring in a small sample of a food that we might eat at home as a family favourite or a food from our culture. This helps us to learn about each other’s cultures and about tolerance of others.I am learning to write a Poem about Peace One Day using my senses.
Percentages & Fractions Problem
Problem Solving Task
50%of 30=12
1\2 of 30= 15
20/of 15
15
10=1.5
1.5x2=3 15-3=12
12 girls have long hair.
Percentages and Fractions Reflection
I am learning to solve problems by using my understanding of the equivalence between percentages and fractions.
I am so proud of being able to finish the problem and get the correct answer.
It can be tricky to divide by 10.
My buddy can help me by checking my work to see if it is wrong or right.
The next step for me in my learning is to do a Stage 7 question by myself.
Friday, 19 September 2014
Friday, 12 September 2014
Plastic-Good or Bad
“Plastics are Bad” by Ben and Mansur
Oil platforms drill into the Earth's surface and extract oil from it. Plastic fishing nets are hazardous to sea creatures. The process of making plastic puts harmful chemicals into the land, air and water. These are my reasons for thinking that Plastics are bad.
These are some pictures of sea creatures that are dying because of plastic.
I am so proud of being able to do this.
I am learning to get more descriptive sentences.
My buddy can help me by buddy checking.
It can be tricky to make descriptive words.
Friday, 5 September 2014
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